OMG. I was just sickened reading about the Muggleborn Registration Commission in canon, and it's just as bad here. I LOATHE Umbridge with the passion of a thousand fiery suns. She is beyond evil. *hate hate hate*
Ahem.
I'm glad Audrey is smart enough to get the heck out of dodge! And poor Percy is all worried about her, for good reason, obviously. I'm trying to imagine what would've happened if Percy had been taking notes and they'd brought her in. There's no way that could be a pretty scene...
Again, you're doing a good job showing Percy the value of his family, not just because they're his family, but because, really, the twins had to have been brilliant. I like that he seems to be softening up towards them more here, too.
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Date: 2009-04-11 03:00 am (UTC)Ahem.
I'm glad Audrey is smart enough to get the heck out of dodge! And poor Percy is all worried about her, for good reason, obviously. I'm trying to imagine what would've happened if Percy had been taking notes and they'd brought her in. There's no way that could be a pretty scene...
Again, you're doing a good job showing Percy the value of his family, not just because they're his family, but because, really, the twins had to have been brilliant. I like that he seems to be softening up towards them more here, too.
More please?