very nicely done piece. Its interesting to see the improvements in each chapter as your grasp of the characters and situations they’re becomes stronger and stronger. I don’t mean that as an insult to your prior chapters. I’m just saying that it gets better with each chapter.
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Date: 2009-07-16 01:03 am (UTC)